Some great writing about the River by Malia.
River poem
Don't always blame the river
Silent waters flow through the level land
Crystally sparkles in the sunlight
Through the valleys and into the ocean
The pitter patter of the rain
Speeding up the flow
Enlarging the water amount
The river rapidly runs
Too much rain
Let the water into the ocean
As waves hit upon the sandy banks
There is a storm tonight
Don't always blame the river
Kia Ora, my name is Taine from St. Patrick's School, Greymouth. I really like your poem because it's colourful and I like the river because I like fishing for trouts there.
ReplyDelete