Here is a piece of writing from Te Aroha about recycling at school. She used great language to persuade her audience. She has some strong reasons to support her opinion. Well done Te Aroha.
WE SHOULD RECYCLE AT KAWAKAWA PRIMARY?
Do you want to stop pollution? Recycling is a great way to help the environment and save it from things such as pollution, Global warming and climate change. I strongly believe that we should recycle our rubbish at Kawakawa primary school. When you recycle your helping your community, school and the world to make it a safer and cleaner place. People are causing massive problems that are damaging our planet that’s why i think we need to recycle at Kawakawa primary school.
Firstly Do you want to make our environment more cleaner? i think that recycling would be a great way to help the environment to stop it from global warming and pollution. Recycling will improve our chances of climate change and save our animals from pollution. It’s vital for us to have clean air when your recycling it helps us lower the amount of rubbish that we throw into our bins. When you don’t recycle your rubbish ends up into the landfill going into the earth.
Secondly it’s a great way to teach the younger students about how to look after Papatuanuku and the animals. When they grow up they can learn to recycle their rubbish to help save our environment and teach their children to recycle. If we recycle at Kawakawa primary we will teach other students how to recycle and what to do to keep our school clean. Recycling can make our school cleaner and might influence other schools to recycle as well.
Finally all schools around New Zealand and the world need to learn how to take care of the earth and their communities as well as their school to help our chances of pollution, climate change and global warming slimmer. Scientists believe that the main cause for global warming is humans and all the oils and gases that are going into the atmosphere also destroying the ozone layer which is protecting us from the heat of the sun.
Kawakawa primary school needs to recycle to stop pollution and other events happening around earth. It will influence other schools as well to recycle and will teach younger students to look after our planet. I am adamant that we should recycle at Kawakawa primary school to save our planet and influence other schools to do the same.
Hi my name is Mase, and I go to Kawakawa Primary. I enjoyed reading your recycling report. Your opinions on keeping on recycling are very good. I too think recycling is very important for our environment. Maybe next time you could use commas in your paragraphs. If you would like to see my blog click here.
ReplyDeleteHi Room 6, it's Room 5 here. We liked your blog about recycling, it was a really good piece of writing. Your paragraphs were very detailed and you used some good language to persuade us. We think it is a good idea to recycle as well, but we need to make sure we put our rubbish in the correct bins. We think your ideas are great, but maybe next time you could look at your punctuation before posting. Thank you for sharing, we look forward to your next post.
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