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Tuesday, July 28, 2015

Bella`s diving giraffe story

Diving Giraffes


Tall adventurous giraffes with knobbly legs and long necks stroll 580 meters high for a dive.As they slowly enter the corridors, one of them stares at the security camera and pokes tongues.  With the first giraffe hanging from the ceiling for the next giraffe to do an  inspiring flip.As they trot back up for another turn two giraffes hold their strength against the ceiling for a double flip.They were so impressive by twisting there knobbly legs with them holding on to the adventurous giraffes.


Kalos's Giraffe


Advarn's Giraffe

After we had finished our Diving Giraffe story, our challenge was to create a picture of the giraffe using Google Drawing.  I used shapes to create my giraffe.  Guess how many shapes I used?

Diva's Diving Giraffe Story


Diving Giraffes

Long lanky legs gracefully strolling down the corridor.They exit the changing rooms one at a time  moving towards the pool.The giraffes realise that there confidence they once had is now replaced with fluttering butterflies while they walk. They finally approach their destination that took them a good 5 minutes.
The giraffes jump of the diving board that is 580 meters...They gallop all the way to the end of the diving board and a long neck helps flip into the pool and then land softly into the water.

Advarns diving giraffe story

Diving giraffes

Their long, lanky legs sneakily  climb 580m. As one of the giraffes secretly checks the security cameras making sure that no one is watching them.The giraffes still twist and turn through the corridor to their  destination. Suddenly they stop and a giraffe comes down from the ceiling. As one is air airborne the other one is right behind ready to get spun. The first one makes it into the water with absolutely no splash. Another giraffe comes from the roof and as they both get in position suddenly you see giraffes sprinting to you spin and twist amazingly. They finish and elegantly take a bow.





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Jamie

Diving Giraffes


It was a normal evening and the pool was closed for the night as everybody left and there was no sound to be heard so some giraffes decide to break in.Strolling through the corridor of the pools one giraffe starts to glare into a security camera, checking just in case there cover was blown.The giraffes face to walk 580 feet above the

ground.

Their walk up the spiral stairs ends as a giraffe sprints to the diving board as one of his comrades support him to show off.The giraffe does a 360 spin in the air and perfectly lands on the water.The other giraffes start to show off as well.They were like ammunition being fired out of a machine gun.Another giraffe is lowered to increase the speed of the line.

After the last jump the giraffes line up to scull a refreshing drink of water.Footsteps echo through the pool corridors.The giraffes evade to the nearest exit to keep their identity concealed.

Simonie-lee`s diving giraffe story

Diving giraffes

Tall giraffes sneaking silently out of the changing rooms making there way to the corridor.Click clacking feet as they walk up the rail each in a straight line and then comes to a stop.One of them was hanging from the ceiling ready to catch their team mates to make a perfect dive.The first giraffe approaches, sprinting towards the diving board, he jumps and makes a perfect back flip with no splash.Each of them does there tricks one by one.Another giraffe comes down from the ceiling helping his team mates.Two of them both came sprinting to the end making there two perfect flips.  Everyone finishes their turn and all line up at the edge of the pool, taking a bow and having a drink of water.They all hear a noise and quickly run to the exit trying to stay out of sight.



Skye's diving giraffes

diving giraffes

the pool just closed as the giraffes walk silently up the corridor as they come to a stop. 580m away from the surface of the water. a giraffe is waiting steadily on a rope hanging from the ceiling fearless of the height. one of the giraffes run and leap from the diving board. the giraffe on the ceiling stretched his long neck and attached it to the giraffe who leaped. they swang and the giraffe performed a perfect double backflip dive.  one after the other doing perfect dives. when they get back up they see two of their friends hanging from the ceiling, then the giraffes split up into halves, one group up top and one down bottom. they run in sync. when they come to the end they leap from the platform and they did the same move and again they did a perfect dive. all of them had a go then they stood on the side of the pool and had a rest. they bent down and had a drink. they took a big scull and suddenly the door opened, then the giraffes ran out the door like nothing happened. and they lived happily ever after.


Terina`s driving giraffe story

               DIVING GIRAFFEs                                            Long and lazy legs begin to enter the corridors,they line up ready to practise their diving skills without a sound.A giraffe slowly hangs down from the ceiling to flip the giraffes to make a perfect dive.The giraffes start one by one, the first giraffe approaches, it sprints and jumps while it crosses its legs and flips landing in the water with a perfect dive.  After everyone had a turn another giraffe came down from the ceiling, then they were able to dive two at a time. They all had a turn and a while after that they stopped and had a drink from the pool, but the giraffes had heard a sound so they all scrambled out.

  



Tuesday, July 21, 2015

Writing Prompt Term 3 Week 1 - Descriptive Writing


Alisi's Writing

A blanket of fresh snow covers  the ground as the man treks through the wood. Making his way up the hill looking over to scan the picturesque view. The cold bites his face numbing it. His breath is like a dragon blowing out smoke. He’s wearing a big puffy jacket,a beanie. Putting his hands in his pockets hiding it from the coldness. Looking in the distance he spotted a red lanky rope dangling from the sky in the middle of no where. He needed to investigate.

He walks towards it being frightened of what it is. Putting both of his hands on it. He pulled it making it dark like a cloth concealing the world. He stopped for a while as excitement rushed through his mind all the way to his body. Goosebumps pricked down his skin. After getting use to it he keeps playing around. Then BOOM!!!!

He pulls it and something wrong happens. He broke it and tried to fix it by pulling it hard and harder. The rope collapsed and begins falling from the sky. The he pulled out the light bulb. As the city lights turned on he knew he was in big trouble. He makes an escape.

Zaytaleah's Writing

Snow crunches beneath his feet. His breaths like a dragons puffing out smoke. The blanket of snow covers the ground. The coldness slaps his face as he walks up the mountains to look at the view. Then there it was…..


The big thick rope that was dangling from the sky .He stared at the rope for 10 seconds then felt it, he started to pull it then he got scared because it went dark then he pulled it again the light came on out of nowhere. He kept playing with it then it……

Suddenly darkness fell from the sky. John pulled the rope that was hanging from the sky he started to pull it, he kept playing with it. Then it stopped it was just dark it came falling from the sky it was sitting on the ground it looked like a pile of spaghetti. The light bulb fell last after he found out he broke it. He feels so scared hopping it was all a dream.

Jayda's Writing


Crunch,crunch as the lonely man walks thru the woods to find his way up to the hill. He makes his way up the to see the beautiful view. He sees the huge chimneys .His hands in his pockets to keep them warm thru the winter.

He scans the view quietly he finds a red thick rope dangling from  nothing holding it he stares at  the rope strangely as it dangles from outer space. He grips his hands on the thick rope and pulled the thick red rope once and he thought that it was magnificent once when he pulled it would be ferocious night and if he pulled again it would be morning light.

He plays with it too much to he does poses and turned it on and off way many times and then he turns it to night and then broke it he tries to pull it to hard the rope falls down bit by bit layer by layer once it all fall down he was worried and he looked at the huge light bolt and walks away.

Adelia's Writing



Dangle

Crunch! The snow crunched beneath his feet as the fog slowly flew out his mouth.He stomps through the colossal white blanket of snow along the concealed trail that leads through the bald trees.The warm clothes on his body kept the wind from giving him goosebumps down his back and along his arms.Finally he reaches his destination at the top of the hill.The hike ended as soon as he saw the view of the city or town.The variegated colours of his clothes shone so bright at the top of the hill that maybe the people of the city or town could see him.Suddenly he spotted an enormous, red rope dangling from the middle of the sky.


He gingerly walked over there to see what it was. “What could it be?” he wondered as he peered around at the bare trees. He cautiously pulled on the lanky rope to see what it did. Click! As soon as he pulled on the rope the sky suddenly turned pitch black. His bottom lip dropped and he gazed into the dark distance for a moment thinking to himself “What did I just do?” and he thought that he did something wrong to the world.He took one step away from it with his hands in the air thinking to himself “I didn’t do it!”.


He took two steps towards the rope again but slowly. As the rope sways back and forth he peers up it to try see where it leads to. He sticks his hand to the rope and hauls it. He repetitively pulls it over and over again but each time he does it he does a different pose. The pattern of daylight and night sky cover the sky like a shadow.Then suddenly he yanks it but nothing happens. “Hmmm? What happened?” he questioned.He tugged it to see if it worked but still,nothing happened.Boom! For the last time he plucked it,it started plummeting to  the white blanket of snow. After it all collapsed to the ground he saw an enormous light bulb. “Ooops!” he sighed. He walked away worried that there might not be day anymore and hoped that no one would know that he did it.

Pihanga's Writing


DANGLE                                                          
A blanket of fresh snow covered the ground as the man trekked through the woods.  He must of been incredibly scared and worried that he wouldn’t be able to find his way back home or back to work.

All of a sudden he reached the top of the hill, he looked around and was surprised to see a rope dangling from the dark sky. He bravely pulled the rope and the light turned off.  He wondered what would happen if he pulled it again, he pulled it again and the light turned on, again and again he pulled on the rope, turning the light off and on till all of a sudden in blew!  He realised he had broken it.  He was so scared that he ran away through the white crunchy snow. 

Tyissa's Writing


Briskly, the man hikes along the hidden trail, snow crunching beneath his feet as he makes his way to the top of a hill. Bare trees standing there like skeletons and a blanket of white snow covers the ground. Puffs of smoke shoot  out of his mouth like a dragon breathing out fire. His hands shoved in his pockets rigidly protecting them from the icy cold air. He finally gets to the top of the hill and scans over the picturesque view.


He's looking around with a smile on his face as he realizes a rope hanging from the middle of nowhere he cautiously approaches the rope he carefully pulls the rope and it goes dark confuse struck he pulled it again and it was icy cold again he realizes what it does and starts pulling it rapidly.

Suddenly its total darkness he keeps pulling hoping it would go back to normal he pulls and pulls but then the rope tumbles to the ground tones and tones of rope falls he noticed a broken bulb he looks at the bulb and runs away feeling guilty.